Reflecting on feedback of first draft.
From the feedback I've gotten for my first draft I've decided to add more references towards Stereotype, race and ethnicity in Disney.
Books I found on this topic
-Cinderella ate my daughter
-Diversity in Disney Films: Critical Essays on Race,Ethnicity, Gender, Sexuality and Disability
-More of the book Understanding Animation - chapter 5
-Good girls and wicked witches
Although my major problem seemed to be my style of writing. I wasn't writing academically I was writing very personal. I have a lot of (I) sentences which I needed to address first. Although in one section I was reflecting on how Disney impacted my own childhood it was still to personal.
To focus on list:
-Disney Stereotype, race and ethnicity
-Build a better conclusion
-Get rid of I focused sentence and personal views.
-More references
Books I found on this topic
-Cinderella ate my daughter
-Diversity in Disney Films: Critical Essays on Race,Ethnicity, Gender, Sexuality and Disability
-More of the book Understanding Animation - chapter 5
-Good girls and wicked witches
Although my major problem seemed to be my style of writing. I wasn't writing academically I was writing very personal. I have a lot of (I) sentences which I needed to address first. Although in one section I was reflecting on how Disney impacted my own childhood it was still to personal.
To focus on list:
-Disney Stereotype, race and ethnicity
-Build a better conclusion
-Get rid of I focused sentence and personal views.
-More references
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